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Mia doesn't know that Olivia entered her casserole into the contest.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
The types of citations which are often used across all citation styles are:
(D) in-text and after-text
When using information from another source, the writer must make an in-text citation right after the information such as a quote has been used. A more detailed citation is made at the end of the text.
