What I usually do to start a thesis or intro is go off with a hook. so start it with why you like to draw. for example: drawing has always played an important role in my life. i want to teach others how to draw so they can understand and enjoy this art...etc, etc
It's Man vs. Self... I read that story and did the answers but i don't know if your abc choice is the same as mine
The sentence is stating what the person did first in the list of all the things he/she did in the rest of the paragraph.
<span><u><em /></u>See in the sentence how it says, <u><em>“First,</em></u> I went to the wrong classroom for math."
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The answer to this question is:
Sentence 3
Stating that "they want people to slow way on down" does not have a clear message. Certain words need to be added and removed to make this understandable. Therefore, sentence 3 messes with the tone of the paragraph.
Hope this helps!
