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Elis [28]
3 years ago
7

Which revision most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in this sentence?

English
1 answer:
ololo11 [35]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

The second one.

Explanation:

The second one is right because there is no confusion.

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