I would say it is too wordy. Try breaking it into 2 sentences or combining them better.
Answer:
I think the answer is C
Explanation:
because the second sentence is give you information about the info in sentence one
Please cite your analysis after your speech.
O A The term "feminism" to describe the movement of
gender equality is too strong a word, which is why Emma
Watson has adopted the term "HeForShe."
O B Emma Watson believes that gender inequality should
not only be a concern for women, but men as well.
OC Gender inequality is an issue that effects women alone,
as women have been denied equal rights and men have
not.
OD The help of men in achieving gender equality is
necessary because their voices and opinions are more
respected than women's.
Emma Watson believes that gender inequality should
not only be a concern for women, but men as well.
Answer: Option B.
<u>Explanation:</u>
Emma Watson gave a speech which she named as "Heforshe". The main focus of this speech was to talk about gender inequality which is a great problem in the society.
According to her, this gender inequality should not only be a concern for them women but the men should also be concerned about it. Men should also join the feminism fight for fighting this inequality in gender in the society.
