Answer:
B. Change they to their children
Anti-climax greatly annoys readers. If they're going to put the time into reading something because it has an engaging plot, they're going to expect an equally interesting climax to arise out of that plot. If the readers don't get that, they're going to feel cheated.
Answer:
D & B
Explanation:
I don't know the context to this text, but beehives are generally very busy. The workers were busy, and they can be compared to a beehive.
Answer:
Simile, Personification
Explanation:
Simile - (whatever the lines are talking about) circling like the clouds
Personification - clouds that swim