Tips :
- have your evidence ready
- provide professional language
- try to keep the conversation going
- don’t let the debate fade away
The narrator of Stolen Day is a boy; the narrator of The Night the Bed Fell is grown up.
Taking away The last sentence would help. An 'In my opinion' Is not good for an essay or summary.
It looks sort of like something that would make a bell noise. Maybe the purpose is to move it around, or maybe just for pure decoration.