Can you show a picture of the reading?
“i don’t know the answer.” is a clause
Art is used in the form of masks, dances, and songs to tell traditional stories and present important morals and values.
DON’T SAY THIS EXACTLY, REPHRASE AND MAKE BETTER, IM JUST GIVING IDEAS
The author could use more data especially for the 3rd paragraph, like about how much time is spent in community service, the author should use more data to try to show the reader the positives and negatives of the community service work