Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
hoep this helps
I believe your answer is D.
He went to London and sold his plays, and since his style of writing was unique, so people were interested in him.
My school is the
<span> oldest in our town, and it is three stories high" is the sentence with the faulty coordination. The age of the school has nothing to do with the height of the school. </span>
well this is really more of an opinion question but I think people volunteer for military service to serve their country and to fight for their freedoms.
This is my opinion though so feel free to say your own thoughts.
