D. Which means Romeo and Juliet were both men :)
It felt like everything turned into slow motion after I tried to reach for that darn balloon. I remember I was having a good time listing to music drinking my Sprite that my mother gave me during our picnic outside today around 3:00 pm. Later on all of the sudden I start feeling nothing in my left arm. The ballon goes flying and I try to chase it and try
catching it when all of the sudden I feel my world is becoming slower in my eyes and my eyesight starts to get dark and that’s when I hit the floor straight to the puddle where I once felt the water drops on my feet.
People seem to think that the pyramid workers were slaves, which is ridiculous and untrue.
The tone of the original passage is formal. It could be in a trusted, reliable source on Egyptians. The answer has an informal tone. It uses the words "ridiculous" and "untrue". These opinion words make the sentence of opinion not a statement of fact. The original sentence is a statement of fact.
Answer:
Mature writing uses broader vocabulary, while immature writing is very descriptive, and often longer.
Explanation:
Mature writing example:
It was obvious that the boy was struggling emotionally.
Immature writing example:
The boy looked very sad, he was crying, and he didn't talk much.
They both get the same point across, but the 1st one sounds way better than the 2nd.