Answer: Awkward and choppy. The amount of pauses makes the passage not flow well together
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Thornton Wilder expected the audience to feel nostalgic about the setting of Grover's Corners. This event is taken from the "Our Town" play created by Thornton Wilder which tells about a town named Grover's Corners. In the opening scene, the stage manager intends to makes the audience feel nostalgic because he wants to tell them about the town's history. Grover's Corners is described as a small town that does not have big landmarks.
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lets try this again! heh
I stood there, certain that the cloudiness of the shower was only partially from the precipitation. My anger was clouding my vision, and I was sure it would cause me to act irrationally in time. How could I let this happen? My only friend, arrested unrightfully. They would pay. All of them. I clenched my hands into fists, gritting my teeth. The water continued to fall onto my head as I refused to move, reminding me of the water that raged all around me on the day he'd been taken. I would avenge him. After all, he'd always said that vengeance was what I was best at.
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That would be the one that fits best :)
