Question

Can I get some feedback on this poem? I need to present something. I also need help with coming up with a title.

Answer 1

I like the poem. it's very honest and personal. if you actually feel that way I'm sorry. no one should ever have to feel like that. don't let the bad outweigh all the good. and I think you should title it "dark rain cloud" or "I'm fine" cause alot of people say I'm fine when they aren't. idk hope this helped

Answer 2

I really like this, I take it to heart. As for a title... idk. Titles are hard to think of! "It's Alright" ??? Something vague like that lol