Write about each topic one at a time. Be sure to not intermix two separate ideas in order to maintain clarity throughout. Do your best to stay on task and not get distracted or go off on unneeded tangents. I would also suggest to separate each topic/idea into its own paragraph indenting each time. That's my advice on keeping your prose writing clear and concise. Hope this helps!
-J
Among the traits I that ones I want my kid to inherit is my kindness, intelligence, and personality.
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They asked about poetry and Alice said Yes some poetry
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"How can I help?"
This was the only thought on young Pablo's mind after the hurricane as he looked at the fallen trees, [1] toppled power lines * and homes without roofs in <u>their</u> town.
"Is that bicycle <u>yours?"</u> asked Mr Sanchez.
Pablo said, "Yes, <u>it's</u> mine."
"Then jump on <u>its</u> seat and ride to the community <u>centre</u> [2]. <u>Y</u>ou can help make ten thousand ham and cheese sandwiches for folks who were evacuated."
Explanation:
[1] comma should be added to separate the list since there are more than two items.
* you may wish to add a comma here too depending on whether you follow US or UK conventions
[2] you don't have to change this if you're using american spelling
i hope this helps! :D sorry if i missed anything.
