Question

Write a short paragraph (3-5 sentences) in which you describe what your room looked like after it mysteriously cleaned itself up. Pay attention to using words that help the reader "see" the room. Unify the description around a single theme or impression you wish to create for the reader. Use correct grammar and punctuation.

Answer 1

     i came back from school and some thing was wrong with my room. the room was rearranged with out my permission!!! the room had marvelous marble floors, a clean white repainted wall so white as a new sheet of paper, a bed with so much pillows that it seemed like i was on top of the clouds, and my desk on the corner by the window giving my cactus a great beam of light so healthy it will never get sick.  the room was so clean that it can roll around everywhere without getting any dust on my clothes. my room had hung fairy lights on the walls to give it a cozy effect and i love my new room!!!!