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maxonik [38]
3 years ago
9

Does this poem sound good or bad?

English
1 answer:
KATRIN_1 [288]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

Just add proper grammar!

Explanation:

Look, it's a great poem don't get me wrong.

But proper punctuation and grammar is always a little bit more attractive and appealing to our eyes.

Let me run my eyes over it really quick and make any adjustments.

Final Draft:

Roses are red, violets are blue, The way you smile makes me swoon. Your eyes are bright, your eyes they are, but I know you shall never be mine. The days are gray, the days are sad, on the day that you have passed I wish I could tell you how I feel but you would only think of me as unreal. So today, as I weep, knowing you love me, I can finally get some sleep.

Glad I could help!!

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