Answer: A) The writer could make the tone more academic.
Explanation: The tone of a text or sentence is the author's or speaker's attitude towards the audience, the subject or even the characters of the text. There are many different kinds of tones, like: positive, negative, objective, sad, angry, etc. From the given options, the one that represents how the excerpt could be best improved, is the corresponding to option A: A. The writer could make the tone more academic, by avoiding expressions like "totally important," "tons," and "it's obvious."
in the economy. Each park creates opportunities for tourism. Millions of visitors travel to national parks. For example, almost three and a half million visitors went to Yellowstone Park in Wyoming in 2012. These visitors need
✔ a variety of services
, which creates job opportunities for local residents.
✔ This evidence shows that
national parks play an important role in the economy at the local, state, and national level.
Because the novelists or narrator, has been fighting and haunted by bad dreams for many years and he has seen many people die over the years. As a results the dead are never far from his memory. These descriptions are intended to show how being surrounded by the unburied bodies affects him emotionally and psychologically.
Their soul will be taken to judgement and god will decide whether that person will go to heaven or hell based on their life and their actions and choices.
