Question

Read the body paragraphs of an argumentative essay.

Answer 1

Answer: A) The writer could make the tone more academic.

Explanation: The tone of a text or sentence is the author's or speaker's attitude towards the audience, the subject or even the characters of the text. There are many different kinds of tones, like: positive, negative, objective, sad, angry, etc. From the given options, the one that represents how the excerpt could be best improved, is the corresponding to option A: A. The writer could make the tone more academic, by avoiding expressions like "totally important," "tons," and "it's obvious."

Answer 2

Answer:

National parks are  

✔ influential

in the economy. Each park creates opportunities for tourism. Millions of visitors travel to national parks. For example, almost three and a half million visitors went to Yellowstone Park in Wyoming in 2012. These visitors need  

✔ a variety of services

, which creates job opportunities for local residents.  

✔ This evidence shows that

national parks play an important role in the economy at the local, state, and national level.

Explanation:

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