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2.) In American gothic stories, nature is cold and indifferent.
3.) Human beings in American gothic stories often struggle for goodness in the face of evil.
Answer:
This question is incomplete. Here is the complete question:
Determine whether each thesis statement is weak or strong.
A] The number of homeless citizens in the United States has recently increased.
B] Smoking should be outlawed because it causes many health problems, such as breathlessness and lung disease.
C] The jeans industry targets its advertisements to appeal to young adults.
D] The invention of vaccinations has had a major effect on humans by wiping out a number of deadly diseases.
Explanation:
The correct answers are:
A] The number of homeless citizens in the United States has recently increased. Weak thesis Statement
B] Smoking should be outlawed because it causes many health problems, such as breathlessness and lung disease. Strong thesis Statement
C] The jeans industry targets its advertisements to appeal to young adults. Weak thesis Statement
D] The invention of vaccinations has had a major effect on humans by wiping out a number of deadly diseases. Strong thesis Statement
A Strong thesis Statement demonstrates a clear and precise idea. The topic will be easily identified and will not lead to confusion.
A Weak thesis Statement is vague and confusing, it is not clear what is the main topic the article is dealing with.
I would suggest saying, "I would make an excellent president because...." (List your reasonings). For "Helpful," you don't need to capitalize the first letter. Make sure you add in an "and helpful," since you're finishing off the reasons.
Canadente is spelled incorrectly. It should be "Candidate."
Lastly, I would suggest saying "have had experience...."
