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Apart from the poor spelling mistakes, those lyrics aren't half bad. If you didn't know, there are certain websites that can turn your lyrics into a song with a full band and singers and everything. Though it comes at a cost, but it's definelty worth seeing your work go to good use.
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she/her or maybe she/they, I haven't really decided yet
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hope you have a nice day! :-)