<span>My suggestions are in bold.
"Even since the beginning of it all, America has never truly been one."
</span><span>Change even to ever.
</span><span>"While slavery does not any longer pertains to today’s society, the obstacle of ostracism is still prominent. All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news. Ostracism, or exclusion, is another concerning problem facing the country."
<span>You introduced us to ostracism more than once. An introduction of an key point should not be repeated.</span><span>
"</span></span>All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news."
It sounds awkward and seems grammatically incorrect. Revise this sentence.
"<span>The purpose many have in mind when they come to the country, freedom of religion results in thousands of different practices of religion with many different views and beliefs."
</span><span>Add a comma after "freedom of religion."
</span><span>"The people of America also have many different beliefs because of their plentiful diversity and backgrounds."
Plentiful is describing diversity. I'm not sure if this is correct or not, but, just to be safe, consider changing "plentiful diversity and backgrounds" to "variety of backgrounds."</span>
Answer: Japanese language is traditionally written from top to bottom and right to left because ancient Japanese written system was imported from the Chinese one and, well, that's basically how Chinese people used to write.
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The brother of New York Giants cornerback Janoris Jenkins was charged with manslaughter in the death of a 25-year-man
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Because it helps you to get from point a to point b and you don't need to waste money everyday on an uber or taxi when you have a car and can go where ever you want
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