Exuse me, but I don't understand what you are saying. Are you referring to another question you posted? I really want to help you but I don't understand your question.
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The author makes sudden actions of Bella that would create surprise and also be at suspense for the reader at the same time. The way people call Bella in a letter surprises her because it makes her special to someone. “I bend to retrieve it, surprised to see “My Bella” scrawled ornately across the front.” The author foreshadows to create a flashback of what happened earlier in the short story.
When the author states in the story “I look past him, but Abuela gasps and exclaims, “Alejandro, after all these years!” the author creates surprise and a feeling of the story's climax. When the author uses foreshadowing he makes the main character show emotion and express herself throughout the short story. Small actions like when Bella recognized who is writing to, make her think or foreshadow the past and then she gets surprised as she notices who is likely writing to her.
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First paragraph states the main point
1-4 look correct to me.
for #5, you are correct that to come is not a prepositional phrase because there is no object. If I were you, I'd leave it alone and keep the one next it. all others look correct.
