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"Oh!," said Goldilocks, "the controlling idea is too vague. As a reader, I can't tell what your essay will really be about. When writing a controlling idea you want to be specific."
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"Oh my," exclaimed Goldilocks. "This controlling idea is too wordy. A controlling idea should be clear and concise. That was I will know what your essay is about."
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"Well, well," Goldilocks said. "this controlling idea doesn't address the prompt. When you look at what it is asking you to write, don't you see how it is asking you to explain the importance? This just says it is is important. But I do like how you thought of another word that means to not give up!"
<em />Its important because it states that a government exists for the benafit of people and that all men are created equal. Adopted by the 13 american on July 4 1776.
Answer: Tessie's obviously negative view of the lottery after she wins conflicts with the readers' previous view of the lottery as rather mundane to create suspense about why Tessie gets so upset.
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Answer is a, b, a, b, c
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Correct on edge. Use the last word of each line to determine scheme.
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yes people will write a 500 page essay for brainly points
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Im sorry, its too much work if its not mandatory or they havent done it already
