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Answer:
The theme is that scientific advances are beneficial to our society, but there is a high price that we will pay for them.
Explanation:
The text shows how scientific advancement is beneficial for a population, making life easier and providing diverse moments of fun and entertainment to all momneto. However, these advances can leave us addicted, obsessed with a certain thing, or even relaxed in the face of certain situations. This will not do us any good, which shows that technological advances are necessary and beneficial to society, but society will have to pay a great price, in social terms, for them.
That’s a compound sentence because on both sides of the comma and the coordinating conjunction are independent clauses
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-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
