Both <span>the internal and external conflict in the story.</span>
Revision literally means to “see again” or to basically see something again from a fresh and critical perspective. One of the best things to do during the revision stage is to have someone else proof read the material for you.
Kennedy felt great pressure to have the United States "catch up to and overtake" the Soviet Union in the "space race." Four years after the Sputnik shock of 1957, the cosmonaut Yuri Gagarin had become the first human in space on April 12, 1961, greatly embarrassing the U.S. While Alan Shepard became the first American in space on May 5, he only flew on a short suborbital flight instead of orbiting the Earth, as Gagarin had done. In addition, the Bay of Pigs fiasco in mid-April put unquantifiable pressure on Kennedy. He wanted to announce a program that the U.S. had a strong chance at achieving before the Soviet Union. After consulting with Vice President Johnson, NASA Administrator James Webb, and other officials, he concluded that landing an American on the Moon would be a very challenging technological feat, but an area of space exploration in which the U.S. actually had a potential lead. Thus the cold war is the primary contextual lens through which many historians now view Kennedy's speech.
To create parallel structure in the sentence, the phrase that would best replace the words "only to offer dinner" is restaurants that offer only dinner.
A parallel structure means that the same form of words or phrases is used in both sentences or parts of the sentence. So here, the first part of the sentence says "restaurants that offer live music..." and in order for it to be a parallel structure, the other part also has to say "restaurants that offer only dinner."
