<span>The passage of the dialogue is written:
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B. correctly
Punctuation such as quotation marks which highlight the speech; comma is put at the right place which includes the emphasis of two different ideas; and period is also correctly placed every after the end of the sentence. Lastly, page breaks are correctly implemented.
I could scarcely "contain" - <span>to keep under proper control; restrain:</span><span>(Example) He could not contain his <span>amusement.
*Note* already within the first eight words you can indicate phycotic feelings
"and he not even to dream of my secret deeds or thoughts"
(Definitions of "secret")
1. </span></span>faithful or cautious in keeping confidential matters confidential; close-mouthed; <span>reticent.
2. </span>done, made, or conducted without the knowledge of others:<span>secret <span>negotiations.
Conclusion </span></span>statement:
Edgar Allan. Poe is mentally psychotic, thought the whole short passage he basically supports my own theory for himself.
(Dictionary was used in the making of this answer)
It's tirade because a tirade is an angry, long, bitter speech or outburst.
I think it is line 4 (since it repeats granite twice) Hope this helps!