Look back at your thesis statement and see if you have included all that information in you concluding sentence.
The course was unlike anything I’ve ever joined in my life. While it was a bunch of fun and interesting to try I did find some of the courses not as fun as some of the others! I personally have a hard time with dancing and making my body physically do things while singing and acting are easier and more fun to connect with.
Lucy is a) daring because of her likes and dislikes
The answer to one is violin viola cello and bass.
