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Alex_Xolod [135]
3 years ago
10

What should I change and what should I take out?

English
1 answer:
miv72 [106K]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

I think the paragraph is really well-written, but I would reccoment not starting the last sentence with the word "and".

Explanation:

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