To expand about yourself more than just what your resume says
Hamel the French teacher is referred to as the poor man because it was his last lesson in the school. ... ... The old men of the village came to the school that day to thank M. Hamel for his forty years of faithful service. They also came to show their respect for the country that was theirs no more.
Answer:
This is really good!!
Explanation:
I really enjoyed your writing and I like how you have set this story up!! The story is extremely intriguing and I almost didn't want to stop reading. I love your descriptive language and it makes the story feel alive. The scenarios feel real and its easy to put yourself in the place of Winter (who is an interesting character) and feel sorry for her and her situation. The one thing I think that could help this even more is maybe some even more descriptive words when describing her running away from Cain (she heard every leaf crunch under her feet and cringed at the thought of him hearing her, she felt the cold breeze and stiff air more than ever alone in that tree and she sat in the short amount of safety that was given to her in that moment, she heard Cains manic laugh echo through the forest, ect.). I feel as though this could make that scene even more better than it already is!! :)
I love this idea and your creativity! Keep writing, this will be amazing!!
"Getting involved in games" refers to the ability of some people to involve their entire daily life within the game, being totally unaware of situations in the real universe and exchanging reality for the game.
"Playing games" refers to the ability to play periodically, but not to involve your whole life in it. In this case, a person likes to play games, but is not absent from reality, nor does he substitute his real life for digital.
The author chose the phrase "engage games" to represent how games have taken the place of real life, and can leave a person completely involved and conditioned to it.
