<span>The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone.
The sentences in the passage do not have errors in grammar or punctuation, so any of these options can be immediately removed. Ending the first sentence with the word "cool" and using "that's for sure" and "you" in the last sentence, give the passage a much more informal tone. These sentences should be revised for a more formal tone to have a stronger concluding paragraph.
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B/ Passive voice hope I am right
Answer: (Homer 376-377) the last one
Explanation: An MLA citation goes "-qoute-" (Authors Last Name Page Number(s)). Don't put a period at the end of the qoute, but put it at the end of the citation.
Answer:
she said he was gay
Explanation:
gay gay jsjs and I think it is not letting her go to the park tmr but she was looking to get the kids and