<span>In the fall of 1995, Gruwell gave each of her
students a bag full of new books and had them make a toast for change. After
that, she saw a turnaround in them. The students went on to surprise everyone.
All 150 Freedom Writers graduated from high school and many went on
to attend college.
The Freedom Writers Diary tells the story of how a teacher and 150
teenagersuUsed writing to change themselves and the world around them. It is a
non-fiction book from 1999 written by TheFreedom Writers, a group of
students from Woodrow Wilson High School in Long Beach, California, and their
teacher Erin Gruwell.</span>
The correct answer is A.
The family needs a safe, dry place to sleep in the winter. Their home in the salt cavern is described as an "impregnable castle." Falconhurst had fallen apart and they decided to use it as a summer home. They move to the cave to survive the winter.
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Revising and editing are the two tasks you undertake to significantly improve your essay. Both are very important elements of the writing process. You may think that a completed first draft means that little improvement is needed. However, even experienced writers need to improve their drafts and rely on peers during revising and editing. You may know that athletes miss catches, fumble balls, or overshoot goals. Dancers forget steps, turn too slowly, or miss beats. For both athletes and dancers, the more they practise, the stronger their performance will become. Web designers seek better images, a more clever design, or a more appealing background for their web pages. Writing has the same capacity to profit from improvement and revision.
You should revise and edit in stages: do not expect to catch everything in one go. If each time you review your essay you focus on a different aspect of construction, you will be more likely to catch any mistakes or identify any issues. Throughout this chapter, you will see a number of checklists containing specific things to look for with each revision. For example, you will first look at how the overall paper and your ideas are organized.
In the second section of this chapter, you will focus more on editing: correcting the mechanical issues. Also at the end of the chapter, you will see a comprehensive but more general list of things you should be looking for.Revising and editing allow you to examine two important aspects of your writing separately, so that you can give each task your undivided attention.
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