You begin with the largest to the smallest. First revise the overall structure. make sure you have introductory paragraph, followed by supporting paragraphs. then summary and closing paragraphs.
After the paragraphs are correct then you can go in and revise sentences that do not belong. either reword or remove.
The final step is the words. making sure they are spelled and used correctly
<span>"D. I traveled by railroad from New York to Chicago on the Cardinal." is the only correct one.</span>
Explanation:
A. opportunities for edequate medical care
The colon goes after ride
The use of foreshadowing in this text is used to retain the reader stimulated and to evade a possible disappointment. At the beginning, the narrator expresses his/her feelings when going back to Aunt Gertrude's house. It appears that the atmosphere is very nice because it is associated to a fairy tale but then, the mood changes and the reader gets the impression that something wrong is going to happen. The mentioning of the ´fairy tale´ could be associated with the good gesture Gertrude had with the orphans and the change of mood with the secret about to be discovered.