You should always end on a note that’s likely to stick in the reader’s mind.
Answer:
Her car's brake lights were faulty.
Abdul's finishing time in the marathon was twenty minutes faster than his previous best.
The stadium's lights dimmed just before the band came out.
He had ten years' experience in catering.
The women's toilets were out of order.
The children's toys were packed in a box.
C. do i have clear focus followed by relevant and intresting supporting details
Hope this helps
Generally one or two pages, but it could be three, though it isn't often.
