Complete Question:
Which revision clarifies the confusing pronoun in this sentence?
Andrew told me that his uncle was a World War II veteran when he was in high school.
Answer:
The revision which clarifies the confusing pronoun in this sentence is as follows:
When Andrew was in high school, he told me that his uncle was a World War II veteran.
Explanation:
This revision clarifies who the pronoun "he" refers to. This means that it clarifies that Andrew was the person in high school when his uncle was a World War II veteran, and not that his uncle was a World War II veteran when the uncle was in high school. The revision makes it very clear that it was Andrew who was in high school and not his uncle by the time Andrew's uncle had been a World War II veteran.
Answer:
Charles Baskerville died in a “sudden and tragic death,” and it was his death that led to Sherlock Holmes being hired. Apparently, the poor man had a bad heart and was frightened by a dog that he thought was the Hound of Hell—the Hound of the Baskervilles. You see, his evil neighbor Mr. Stapleton moved in and tried to get his money, feeling he was the one who was truly worthy of the estate. He decided to use the story of the hound to scare Henry, killing him and then getting the land and manor.
Explanation:
Answer:
First Sentence- by: should be by
Second Sentence- a professional dietician, should be :a professional dietician. Also, says should be says,
Third Sentence: Cole: should be Cole,
Fourth Sentence: are: should be are
If these aren't correct, I am truly sorry.
This passage conveys a very negative, impatient, frustrated tone. Words and phrases like "waiting", "got to be kidding", and " can't figure out what's wrong with one cell phone" are the clues.