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I like your poems, I get what feeling and emotion is behind it, but I would say don't use the word darkness and light so much, switch up the words, maybe instead of "For nothing is around me" you can say something like "and all is lost, nothing to be seen for a never ending eternity, i feel as dark as the emptiness around me, i'm terrified and alone."
I really like your second poem. I wouldn't change anything.
For the third one, again I would be more descriptive, maybe go a little more in detail about some of the things you are expressing. I think you are talented, I really like your poems!
Explanation:
I suggest you just pick which person you want to describe first then start comparing him to one or the other then do the same for contrast.
Answer: The poem is about a Jamaican mom who introduces his kid to his teacher the first day of school, while warning the teacher about his behavior and personality, and how to treat him.
Explanation:
Louise Bennett Coverley wrote this poem about a mom who takes his son on the first day of school. She starts by introducing his child and giving a background of how he was born. She then warns the teacher of how her son commonly misbehaves and informs her that If she hits another boy, he will learn the lesson and obey. This poem portrays an overprotecting mother who is aware of his child's incorrect actions but still asks a soft treatment towards him.
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With kids ages 8 to 18 spending on average 44.5 hours per week in front of screens, parents are increasingly concerned that compulsive internet usage is robbing them of real world experiences. Nearly 23% of youth report that they feel "addicted to video games" (31% of males, 13% of females.) These are the results of a study of 1,178 U.S. children and teens (ages 8 to 18) conducted by Harris Interactive (2007) that documents a national prevalence rate of pathological video game use.
Dr. Douglas Gentile, Director of the Media Research Lab at Iowa State University reports, "Almost one out of every ten youth gamers shows enough symptoms of damage to their school, family, and psychological functioning to merit serious concern."