It’s called an onomatopoeia, they are used a lot in comic books. :)
You wrote;
"Hello I am Angelica. What are you?"
Therefore, just change
'너 뭐야?' to "<u>잘 지냈어요?</u>"
which means, "How are you?" or "How are you doing?"
That she is deeply hurting or distraught
Answer:
How to revise:
Put your draft aside. Time away from your essay will allow for more objective self-evaluation.
Get feedback. ...
Construct a backward-outline of your essay. ...
Rethink your thesis. ...
Now that you know what you're really arguing, work on the introduction and conclusion. ...
Proofread.
