The recording misses opportunities to use sound effects instead of stage directions: Stage instructions are not important in an audio recording, since the movement of the actors will not be seen. For this, recording should display sound effects in place of the instructions to improve the listener's understanding.
The recording follows the original text instead of reinterpreting it: The recording follows the text to the letter, to let the quality of writing is followed with quality.
first authors first and last name, then the title of the book followed by any chapters/sections used. then the volume (in applicable) them publishers and the year it was published. any editors are out at the end
