Here is your text with the adjustments. I've erased all the redundant information, which made it easier to read. Next, I added some suggested places in which you should insert your sources.
I haven't put the text's correction here because it exceeded the character limits.
I hope you can continue adjusting your text and make it even better!
Answer:
Am I supposed to correct the sentence? If so then it should be Cattle are not allowed to enter this ground.
Explanation:
Importance of hometown life. I hope this helps.
