Answer:
B. Word choice
Explanation:
If your editor keeps noticing and pointing out reppetition, then you may want to try and be more diverse woth your wording. Definetley try using different adjectives to add more detail and keep it interesting for the reader.
By agreeing to marry Paris
The Gettysburg Speech is perhaps the most important speech in US history. This speech was delivered by Lincoln in less than two minutes, at the end of the American civil war. That's because the message he wanted to give was fast, clear and didn't need a lot of arguments, because it was evident that it was true.
Lincoln inspired by the principles of equality defended in the Declaration of Independence of the country, declared the end of the war based on the concept that the country was born to be a country of free people and owners of their own lives, the end of the war allowed freedom be offered to everyone, as the founding fathers wanted and fought for it. Thus, Lincoln established that the end of the war would bring a nation united in recovery and truly free.
A charming white flower that sparks his eyes
Next September, it will be eight years since we got married.
By next September, we will be married for eight years.
I will finish my coffee first and then I will have a shower.
I will have a shower as soon as I finish my coffee.
Yesterday, I ate sushi for the very first time.
I had never eaten sushi until yesterday
hope that helps :)
