Answer:
Paragraph rewritten with consistency: " In the story, "The Valiant Woman" by J. J. Powers, we find that in judging people we overlook most of the characteristics that draw us to him (them), but we do so without realizing it. You (we) can draw inaccurate conclusions about a person by misjudging their facial expressions, their physical stamina, and their obvious personality traits. When people (we) are blinded by false superiority, they (we) judge a person incorrectly because they (we) fail to see them as they really are."
Explanation:
To generate consistency in the above passage, you must keep the message linked to a single narrative, keeping pronouns fixed to something or someone. For this it is necessary that you when speaking with readers always use the pronouns "we", "us", while, when referring to the people being judged, always use the pronouns "they" and "them". In this way the passage will show consistency, as shown above.
Because he was doing drugs
Answer:
<u><em>To give </em></u>is one of the best things people can do. <em><u>Volunteering</u></em> their time showed what caring people they are.
Explanation:
Gerunds are the words that are in the "-ing" form of the verb but acts as a noun. On the other hand, infinitives are the verbs that are preceded by "to" but do not act as a verb in the sentence.
In the given sentence, the word "giving" is a gerund while "to volunteer" is an infinitive. Changing these two into an infinitive and a gerund will make the sentence as
<u><em>To give </em></u>is one of the best things people can do. <em><u>Volunteering</u></em> their time showed what caring people they are.
