Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
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Page my 1 maybe you should look in the book instead of going on Brainly.com.com and asking such a dumb page
Answer:
ummm ok
Explanation:
*sweet home Alabama starts playin
D, there's nothing to change. Taking anything away would cause the sentence to be a fragment.
