The first one. The commas are correctly placed. Sorry if this is wrong.
        
             
        
        
        
Included what year this happened in and how your father was feeling, also included what he did to stop the pain and whether or not he went to the hospital
        
                    
             
        
        
        
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Repetition emphasizes the tone and mood of the narrator, when we see that he repeats the bad qualities any one can guess that the narrator is angry, this applies to real life as well.
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"so very clownish", "totally without air"