Answer: ima say no its not a RUN-ON sentence
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"Sitting there like a lap dog" is a simile because it's comparing two things through the use of the word "like".
"The jungle drums began beating" correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think this is personification, but it depends a bit on the context.
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I feel like you should use common nouns which refer to a certain place, object (phone) or a person
You could also use concrete nouns things which physically effect you for instance our senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
Verbs I would say to use would be descriptive verbs (adjectives) to make your story more interesting and overall a better story. To answer you question specially I would say use long verbs like adjectives in a list describing someone/something. I hope this helped you !
The dates, locations and what measurements the temperature is taken in.
