The balloon rocketed into the sky. Though we were frightened, everything ended up being fine.
- The word "quickly" can be removed because speed is implied with the word "rocketed"
- The phrase "into the really cold air" can be removed because it is irrelevant to what's happening. It can be replaced by "into the sky"
- Now "up" can be removed because "into the sky" implies that the balloon went upwards.
- Either the word "scared" or "frightened" can be removed because they're synonyms (I chose to remove "scared")
- "Because it was moving really fast" can be removed because the use of the word "rocketed" beforehand already implies that the balloon was moving fast.
- Lastly , I just reworded and conjoined some of the sentences to make them read more clearly though this isn't necessary. (I changed the third sentence from "However, it was all good in the end," to "everything ended up being fine." I also combined the second and third sentences, adding "though" in front of the second sentence to make it a dependent clause)
Answer: An emotional appeal to emphasize the United States' commitment to justice. In this excerpt, Kennedy emphasizes the United States' commitment to providing aid and support to people struggling everywhere around the world
Explanation: hope this helped u :)
1. In the springtime, the park <u>had a </u><u>multitude</u><u> of ducks.</u>
2. I wasn't sure if I liked the music, <u>so I listened</u><u> tentatively.</u>
3. Does being on the dance team <u>entail</u><u> that I have to wear short shorts?</u>
4. Doing well on the test requires <u>extensive</u><u> consideration and contemplation of the answers.</u>
5. After an hour of <u>indecision</u><u>, I had finally decided to sing with Carl, instead of Lucia, for the talent show.</u>
6. Our school needed money to buy books for the library,<u> so a group of parents decided to be the </u><u>benefactors</u><u> and raised money for the school!</u>
Maybe A, B, & D? i don’t really know they all look correct to me lol
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