Question

GIVING BRAINLIST

Answer 1

you used the passive voice incorrectly, and you missed the period at the end of the entire paragraph, and that is pretty much it, you did a really good job.

Answer 2

You should underline The Bluest Eye and other book titles instead of putting a quotation. Also, I think your last sentence is incomplete. You also need to put some commas in long sentences to prevent a run-on sentence.

Hope this helped!