you used the passive voice incorrectly, and you missed the period at the end of the entire paragraph, and that is pretty much it, you did a really good job.
You should underline <u>The Bluest Eye</u> and other book titles instead of putting a quotation. Also, I think your last sentence is incomplete. You also need to put some commas in long sentences to prevent a run-on sentence.
The feeling of emotion is the same for both the young and old just as is the same for all in various social groups for same age. The only argument lies with personality difference whic
