Answer:All improved
Explanation: because each time I'd read I'd become more informed about the paragraphs meaning.
Change an important detail as well as the small details. For example Cinderella. Her name was Ella when she was born both her parents died. she was sent to a cook in the castle who bought her as a slave. There the prince fell in love with her. But she couldn't go to the ball cause she had to serve the prince..... and you can probably change it add more details and finish it but this is an idea.
<h2>First, you should write your goal using positive and not</h2><h2>negative language. Next, make sure you find people who</h2><h2>will support you as you try to reach your goal. Finally, give</h2><h2>yourself a reward every time you make a small step toward</h2><h2>the bigger goal. If you follow these guidelines, your goal is</h2><h2>more likely to be a successful one.</h2>
A. People set both professional and personal goals,
B. There are several things to do when setting a goal.
C. Many schools offer classes on how to set goals.
<h3><em><u>D</u>. People who set goals tend to do more in life than people who</em><em> </em><em>don't.</em></h3><h3 /><h3 />
(Your address)
Top Aliens
c/o Out of this World Bob ZA
Alien dolls
125 Marz Street
Martian Village, NY 96985
Dear Bobett,
I saw and ordered your, “Out of
this World Bob ZA Alien” dolls online a few days ago. I received them in the mail today. I noticed it was supposed to come with seven
unique aliens. However, it came with seven
ThingamaBOBs instead.
Can you please send me the other
dolls in the set (Bob, Bobster, Bobbie, Bobetta, RoBOBert, and Bobcat)? If you want, I can send the extra six
ThingamaBOB dolls back.
Thank you for taking care of
this. I know I will enjoy the complete
Bob family!
Best Regards,
Your Name
13. Command
14.A
15. B.
16. C
17. I'm not positive on this one. However, I am going to guess run on simply because they're should have not been a and in between.
