We are so full of sorrow and pain for the loss of your son Tom Robinson.
The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt is <span>adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the island.
</span>The author just mentions their beliefs briefly, but doesn't really expand on that topic, which may be relevant further down in the text. This is why I believe that adding such details is important to include in this essay to make it more detailed and easy to understand.
You don’t know what is going to happen in either one , you don’t know what the tv show is about but you don’t know what is going to happen . You know what school your going to but you don’t know if your going to like it
<span>Without strong reading skills, it is difficult for people to hold jobs and become productive members of society.
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