I think that 20% of smokers wanting to quit smoking would be too narrow because that is only 20 people out of 1,000,000 that want to quit smoking versus 90% of people that would lie to quit.
Instead of either it should be ‘all’.
from two stones clapping together. There was no one else around. Em thought that the wind was making the sound, but when she looks outside not a single breeze is in sight. She gets so scared she screams, but no one comes. They say if you listen closely at night you can hear the two stones clapping together and Em screaming.
Romeo compares Juliets beauty to the sun of dawn, he calls the moon a pale competitor for brightest illumination of the night
An ailment is a disease that is very common but not serious