Question

Read an excerpt from the introduction to an informative essay. The Neolithic Revolution was an important turning point in history. Instead of moving from place to place to gather enough food to survive, early peoples were able to settle in one place, farm crops on a large scale, and build settlements. How could a writer most improve the thesis in this introduction? By describing the crops that were grown by explaining the lasting change that occurred by providing sources for the information used by summarizing events that happened later

Answer 1

its B, by explaining the lasting change that occurred

Answer 2

The author of this essay could improve the thesis in this introduction by explaining the lasting change that occurred. What readers need to know from such an important period in the past are the events that lasted in time.