Question

Read Delilah's personal narrative. My cat has been in my family for six years. We adopted her from the animal shelter when she was two years old and I was nine. Her name is Bettie. She is a very kind and loving cat. She always cheers me up when I feel sad. She has taught me a lot about kindness. What would best improve Delilah's narrative?

Answer 1

Answer:

if you changed the sentence layout to

Explanation:

My cat has been in my family for 6 years. I was 9 when we adopted a 2 year year old cat from the shelter.       Or if you combined more sentences            or add some commas instead of periods

Answer 2

Answer:

D. examples that demonstrate her cat’s qualities

Explanation:

This is the answer on edgenuity :)