Things that should be avoided are phrases like:
in my opinion
i think
i believe
and definitives like: completely, never
January 19, 1809. Boston, MA.
It's A, <span>revolution around the Sun takes a year so it's not B and the earth doesn't revolve around the the moon so it's not C.</span>
The second one is a run on sentence
The king and the duke were forced to leave the town as they had already hosted theater play shows in the town. Their performance was so bad that the audience wanted their money back. Luckily one of the audience members suggested to themselves that instead of getting their money back, they should let other townsmen come in and spend on the show and then maybe get their money back so that they do not appear stupid to have spent money on a worthless show.
Explanation:
The King and the duke cannot stay in the town for another night and so they flee with what money they collected in two days’ show.
Jim regrets having beaten his daughter. He beat her as she would not listen to him to close the door, repeatedly. Upon beating her he happens to realize that she was deaf and could not hear a thing.
