I don't think a correction is necessary. Both parts of the sentence are already in the present tense. Plus, the use of "us" in the beginning of the sentence indicates a personal attachment.
Answer:
THE FIRST PARAGRAPH
Explanation:
Due to the nature of an essay the thesis statement is generally always in the first paragraph, in this case the very first line is the thesis statement.
Answer:
thats not a normal question
Explanation:
id k what to put
It is by listening and evaluating the speaker's questions and responses. When the speaker asks a question, he is surely making a point to the audience through his responses. By that kind of communication, the speaker should have given his purpose to the audiences.