OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
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<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
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The correct answer would be C) The picture frame, which we bought at a flea market, fell apart when we tried to hang it.
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1.relating to the body as opposed to the mind
2.relating to things perceived through the senses as opposed to the mind; tangible or concrete
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Yes I do agree since each one has specific tasks and responsabilities to hold. If any side of them influenced the other it may stop it from performing its job with a high quality.We've seen examples of countries combini ng church and state through history and the amount of problems they faced
